Haiku About Time and Aging
Haiku have a trick for time: they show it by what has worn down. Anita Roberts Soupir’s barn is a TIRED BARN DROOPING
, with a ROOF BOWED
, broken doorways and dark, cold windows. The poem never says the word old. Every part of the building has given up a little, and the reader adds the years.
The same technique works at any scale. Anna Yin sets a twentieth anniversary between ROUGH WAVES
and SANDS IN THE BED
, so that two decades of marriage are told as weather and grit. Simon Kewin goes to the opposite pole: YOUR LAST MOMENTS CAPTURED TEN MILLION YEARS AGO
, and the poem is a fossil. A short poem can hold both.
Fabio Sassi brings in a modern loss: THE SMELL OF PAPER
gone missing among TOUCH SCREEN PAGES
. Aging, here, belongs to a habit and a smell, and the speaker is old in the way that anyone who remembers books can be.
Brittle
Scott Wiggerman puts peppermint sticks beside old men with canes and closes with BRITTLE SEASON
. The word brittle serves both: candy snaps, bones snap, and the season may be the winter of a life. Few poems get so much from one adjective. JR Vork uses the same word for a maple leaf that FADES TO BRITTLE BROWN
, and the last line adds HER LAUGHTER
, which turns a seasonal poem into a farewell. Doug V. D’Elia gives age a face: LONG BRAIDED BEARDS
grubby with wisdom, and a closing image of roots to gather ends with the ground.
Moving without progress
Audrey Samuelson’s fireflies IN A JAR
are CONSTANTLY MOVING NEVER PROGRESSING
. The jar is a clock without hands, and the poem is about the kind of time that passes without anything getting done.
54 poems
THE TOLL OF TIME
TIRED BARN DROOPING;ROOF BOWED, BROKEN DOWN DOORWAYSWINDOWS DARK, COLD
Issue #6, page 89
ROUGH WAVESFINDING SANDS IN THE BED20TH ANNIVERSARY
Issue #2, page 75
PHOTOGRAPHED IN STONE
PHOTOGRAPHED IN STONEYOUR LAST MOMENTS CAPTURED TENMILLION YEARS AGO
Issue #2, page 93
PEPPERMINT STICKSAND OLD MEN WITH CANESBRITTLE SEASON
Issue #3, page 53
FIREFLIES IN A JARCONSTANTLY MOVINGNEVER PROGRESSING
Issue #1, page 95
PAPER
THE SMELL OF PAPERLOST IN THE TOUCH SCREEN PAGESOF THE LAST DEVICE
Issue #3, page 81
GREEN MAPLE LEAF
GREEN MAPLE LEAFFADES TO BRITTLE BROWN --HER LAUGHTER
Issue #9, page 21
LONG BRAIDED BEARDSGRUBBY WITH WISDOMROOTS TO GATHER
Issue #3, page 103
HOW THEY FIGHTOLD COUPLE WHO CAN'TREMEMBER
Issue #2, page 57
GRAVITY TUGS ON YOUNG FACES (AGING)
MY FACE IS MELTING.UNDER EACH FOLD, A STORYI WON’T REMEMBER.
Issue #8, page 109
REFLECTION
RAZOR IN MY HANDTHE FACE IN THE MIRROR ISTHAT OF MY FATHER
Issue #1, page 37
LUCID THOUGHTS FLEEINGINSIDE HIS WITHERING MINDHE STILL CLIMBS MOUNTAINS
Issue #5, page 65
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AN ORANGE PEEL SCENTREMINDS ME OF GRANDMOTHER –MY GNARLED HANDS
Issue #5, page 71
SOFT CARPET OF LEAVES
SOFT CARPET OF LEAVESLIFE-FORCE GOES BACK TO THE SOILBUT WE MUST FALL TOO
Issue #7, page 37
PINK PETALS COVERTHE SILVER STRANDS OF HER HAIR –KNITTING NEEDLES CLICK
Issue #4, page 11
OLD GERMAN SHEPHERD
MY OLD SHEPHERDCHASES SQUIRRELSWITH HER EYES
Issue #2, page 21
LOVE POPS PAST FIFTYEASING PAINS IN OLDER JOINTSREVIVING OLD ACHES
Issue #3, page 63
INCANDESCENT BULB
FAREWELL, OLD NIGHTLIGHT,WARM LULLABY, TUNGSTEN GLOW.HELLO, DIM NEW WORLD
Issue #4, page 21
LUNA
WANING CRESCENT MOON,SILENTLY SLIMMING YOUR SHAPE.SMALLER, SMALLER STILL
Issue #5, page 49
PALE ASPEN SPROUTSQUIVERING LEAVES KITE OVERTHOUSAND YEAR OLD ROOTS
Issue #6, page 61
EPHEMERAL WINTER
FRIGID ICE SCULPTURESOF TEMPORARY BEAUTYLAST IN MEMORY
Issue #7, page 35
NURSING HOME III
WORLDLY POSSESSIONSLOCKER AND IN THREE DRAWERSAND AWAIT THE END
Issue #7, page 45
STONE FOREST SHADOWS
STONE FOREST SHADOWSWHERE KUNMING MEMORIES WILLOUTLIVE ALL OF US
Issue #7, page 63
NATURE IS SLEEPINGLEGISLATORS ARE AWAKETIME IS MOVING ON
Issue #7, page 73
FLOWER PETALS
PETALS IN THE WATERSEPARATE AS EACH OF THEMGO THEIR DIFFERENT WAYS.
Issue #8, page 91
SHADOWS
TREES DIFFUSE SUNLIGHTAS TIME FILTERS MEMORIESSHADES OF OUR SHADOWS
Issue #9, page 51
OLD MAN'S HAIR
SPRING BREEZERUFFLES OLD MAN'S HAIRA DANDELION –
Issue #11, page 19
TIME WILL TELL
TRIBULATIONS PASSKNOWLEDGE CHANGES PERCEPTIONTIME REVEALS ALL TRUTH
Issue #11, page 27
BLUE SKY OVERHEADSNOWFLAKES ENVELOP MY PATHTHE YEARS SLIP AWAY
Issue #11, page 59
ROMAN STATUESBROKEN, ARMLESS, BEHEADED—SHATTERED MAJESTY.
Issue #11, page 91
AGED LEAVES CLINGINGREMEMBERING YOUNGER DAYSREINCARNATION
Issue #12, page 13
STUMBLING ONWARD
DAYS, LIKE DOMINOS,STRETCH OVER AN UNKNOWN PATHFALLING, ONE BY ONE
Issue #12, page 45
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FOG...MY GRANDMOTHER TALKSTO HER DOLL
Issue #12, page 49
AFTER THE STORM
CHRONICLE THE RAIN,ITS GOLD WAX AND ITS GREY WANE,NOTHING LEFT THE SAME.
Issue #12, page 75
WINTER MEMOIR
WINTER MEMOIRASH AND DUST OBSCURESMANTEL CLOCK FACE
Issue #12, page 97
WAKE UP
A PIXIE-GREEN MARSHI FOUND MYSELF THERE, ASLEEPFOR TEN ABSENT YEARS
Issue #12, page 99
KNOWING THAT FINITE EXISTS
WE LOVE TOO WELLTOO CLEARLY, TOO BRUTALLY, AND HONESTLY.CLINGING TO FOAM THAT REMAINS ADRIFT.
Issue #13, page 34
HAIKU # 57
RELUCTANT LEAVES FALLFROM THE OLD TREE SHOWERINGAN OLD MAN WALKING.
Issue #13, page 37
EBBING SILVER TIDESSLIDING FROM ROCKY INLETEVER SO SLOWLY
Issue #13, page 47
TOO MANY SHADOWSTHE PIGEON HOLES OF A LIFEFADING IN THE DUSK
Issue #14, page 13
WINTER SELF-REFLECTION
--AS AN ICICLEWATCHES HIMSELF UNRAVELDROP BY DROP….
Issue #14, page 19
OUTPOST
LONELY WATCHTOWER:THE YEARS WAITING WITHIN YOUBECAME A TEMPLE.
Issue #15, page 17
LIFE
LIFE IS AN OLD HORSEMAN;WANDERING AIMLESSLY, WITH NO STOPS. FLAGGING BITTERLY.I AM THE FLAGGED HORSE.
Issue #15, page 18
DOG LEASH
DOG LEASH–THE SILENT PENDULUMOF THE HALL CLOCK
Issue #15, page 19
TOO MANY DAYDREAMS
TOO MANY DAYDREAMSWATCHING THE DOORSTEP OF LIFENOTHING REALIZED
Issue #15, page 28
THE LIGHT CALLED DAY
HOWLING, FAT BABYFOLDS TIME IN HALF, ASKS THE DAYWHO GAVE IT BIRTH. NIGHT?
Issue #15, page 31
THE BAY OF FUNDY
WIND CARVES ROCK; THE TIDECLEAVES THE LAND AND SEA…WILDNESS.TIME PASSING, AND STILL.
Issue #16, page 8
THE FORGOTTEN ONE
INSIDE HIS OWN WORLDIDEAS AND FACES SWIRLEDTHE CLOCK TICKS--A BLUR
Issue #16, page 11
THE SILENCE OF NOW
THE SILENCE OF NOWPAST GLORIES LONG FORGOTTENECHOES OF THE PAST
Issue #16, page 12
GOLD
FIELDS HEAVY WITH WHEATWISELY BOB THEIR GOLDEN HEADSTHEY KNOW OF ENDINGS
Issue #16, page 24
AT THE PARTY
PLUMP GRAPES ON THE TRAY—SOMEONE SINGS OF PASSING TIME—AROMAS OF WINE.
Issue #17, page 50
PUNK SONGI'M SIXTEEN AGAINFOR THREE MINUTES
Issue #17, page 56
SMALL HOURS
THE BEND IN MY ARM,STIFFENED BY THE STRETCH OF NIGHT,ACHES FOR YOUR YOUNG DAWN
Issue #18, page 50
CHANGE
CHANGE BLOWS THROUGH LIFESTRONG GUSTS NEVER CEASINGOBSTACLES VANISH
Issue #18, page 56
Questions readers ask
What shows time passing in a haiku?
Mostly by contrast between a thing and its condition. A barn is a barn until the roof bows. A marriage is a marriage until the bed fills with sand. The change is the story, and the poet needs to name only the end state.
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Last reviewed November 2026. Poems are the work of the poets credited and link to their pages in the original issues.